NaPoWriMo, day four

Inspired by this photo taken from someone else and from lovely memories of being at this exact place on the beach, taken from myself. Imperial Beach is my favorite place in the whole entire world, and the pier is my favorite place on the whole entire beach.


seashell fingernails
build castles out of tiny

black sky and winter air
soft arms
around a little girl’s shoulders
on the pier,
tucking her jacket closer
to her body.

for one moment, i was
in her bones

there are star shards at the
water’s edge
mingling with sand and
sprinkling through her hair,
burning against her

when i wake up, i
that these pieces of the sea
and red velvet sky
will be left
somewhere inside my soul.



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3 responses to “NaPoWriMo, day four

  1. This is really nice. I like the fourth stanza the best. :)

  2. so vibrant, tangible. i can almost taste the sea air…

  3. this reminds me of a passage in lord of the flies.

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